Someone can help me, please … Written English?

I am a Mexican medical student, I made a summary of the paper, but my teacher says I have to improve the style and syntax. I did my best, someone can help me please give some changes to improve, thanks very abstract. Eosinophilic fasciitis (EF) is a disease of unknown etiology characterized by inflammation and induration skin that mainly affects the extremities, elevated immunoglobulin and peripheral eosinophilia. Objective: To evaluate the effectiveness of cyclosporine A in patients without response to steroid therapy with a diagnosis of EF. Patients: We present three patients with clinical laboratory and pathological features of the EF, which answer is not to treatment with steroids. The main symptoms are skin orange slot and indurations signs of affected limbs, scleroderma, as signs. All patients had peripheral eosinophilia and increased creatine kinase (CK). The pathological findings were thickening and inflammation of the fascia and normal epidermis.

The corrections are as follows: I did what I could. Can someone please help me make some changes to improve the summary? Thank you very much. Eosinophilic fasciitis (EF) is a disease of unknown etiology characterized by inflammation of skin and predominantly indurations affects the extremities. It is characterized by elevated immunoglobulin and peripheral eosinophilia. Objective: The evaluation of the effectiveness of cyclosporine A in patients with the diagnosis EF who did not respond to steroid treatment. We present three (3) patients with laboratory, clinical and characteristics of EF pathologict Repond no treatment steroids. The symptoms of the patients were orange peel, the signs of the groove, and the indurations exrtemities affected, suggesting signs such as scleroderma. All patients had peripheral eosinophilia and increased creatine kinase (CK). Thickening and inflammation of the fascia pathologic findings. The epidermis is normal. Hey, good to do it well with his English, especially in the study of medicine.